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Winter Night Open in new Window. [E]
Shh. It's time to sleep.
by Arakun the twisted raccoon Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

Winter is a time to rest and sleep.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The author uses a good economy of words to paint an immediate picture, but also leaves the reader something to ponder.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem with 5 couplets and each couplet rythmes.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud. Good use of WDC ML.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Velvet sky and satin snow, cover the earth below," It's a nice, easy description that I can imagine. I can put myself in the moment, looking out a window and contemplating what I'm seeing.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The presentation engages the reader, putting them in the moment. The title fits the poem well. Nice expression.

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