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Review #4794505
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Tourniquet Open in new Window. [GC]
We have a strange relationship.
by Elisa, Stik of Clubs Author Icon
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Rated: GC | (3.5)
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Hi Elisa, Stik of Clubs

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I thought you did a great job with the description and structure of this piece. It's a complicated, visceral type of poetry, and I think you did really well communicating that to the reader.


Suggestions

The only small suggestion I have is that the piece feels a little overly-long given the subject matter. While it may full well have been your intended affect, reading about such intense subject matter for such an extended period of time.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Sincerely,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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