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 My Year Of Freedom Open in new Window. [E]
A worship song I wrote about overcoming addictions
by Aaron Sullivan Author Icon
Review by Annette Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hello Aaron Sullivan Author Icon,

These lyrics are a great testament to shedding an addiction. If it takes faith to replace a chemical addiction, then that's a good use of faith. I hope that the song is true and that there is a whole year of sobriety to look back on.

A few observations about the overall presentation follow.

Your disclaimer at the top mentions that the audio is coming soon. Then, there is a link at the bottom that goes to a YouTube video. Without clicking on the link at the bottom, I'm not quite sure how to understand this part of the disclaimer:

I use AI to bring my songs to lifeā€¦this time the AI didnt do all the lyrics but most of them

Does AI sing your song or write the lyrics for your song? I haven't really gotten into the AI game yet. I made a few images, which appeared easy enough. And yielded some freaky results. I don't know how much text or how many keywords you have to give AI to make a whole text or song, so that would be something to make very clear since we're all here to read & review each other's writing and creativity. It's not a problem if you used AI to generate the lyrics since you have that disclaimer.

Little typos:

my heart, my mind, my life *Right* My

Im not alone *Right* I'm

Fourth line from the bottom this is my year of freedom! *Right* This

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