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In the Stillness of Heart Open in new Window. [E]
free verse poem
by turtlemoon-dohi Author Icon
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE POEM

The poem lulled me into a quiet calm as it shared heartfelt feelings of love.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I loved how the poet used a good economy of words to paint a vivid nature setting. I felt like I was settling into a warm snuggle in the middle of the woods.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use to WDC ML to increase the font. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Stars kiss the night, and wink promises on the water." I could envision myself under a night's sky, looking up the stars and feeling that feeling of wonder when you look up.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening makes the reader feel nice and cozy and keeps them reading. The title is a nice, emotional fit for the poem. I enjoyed the reverence for nature in the poem. Nice expression.

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