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 Serendipity now  Open in new Window. [E]
Serendipity now
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE POEM/PROSE

The poem offered a heartfelt look at serendipity.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poem highlighted a charming story of a dream that held onto, which came true. Must have been serendipity!

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem/prose with no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes. I might suggest a minor edit for punctuation. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font. The poem was easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "In fact she haunted my dreams for eight years," What an honest statement and it's one that we can all connect with. We've all had dreams that have lingered with us and when they come to life it's very rewarding.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening intrigues the reader in and keeps them reading. The title is a nice fit for the poem/prose. A very emotional poem that leaves the reader with a heartwarming smile.

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