This reminds me of Ecclesiastes 12:1: Remember also your Creator in the days of your youth, before the evil days come and the years approach when you will say, “I have no pleasure in them”.

There is a bluntness and no poetry in your one hundred and sixty character reflection of the “evil days,” but perhaps that is as it should be. Old age can sometimes be blunt and non-poetic on those who reach it. And keeping this entry to one hundred and sixty characters reflects the disposability society feels toward the Boomer generation as a whole.