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Winter Wonderland Open in new Window. [E]
Here's some things to enjoy in the heart of Winter!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Steph!

I see you've had three enthusiastic ratings since I started this draft at 5AM *Laugh*

I'm reviewing your word search even though I don't have a desktop to complete it on. It looks like such fun, though, that I might print it out and do it on paper, the old-fashioned way!

Now, you understand that actually solving the puzzle is not required for a review, because the way the words get arranged in the puzzle block changes every time the page is reloaded, so it's not part of what you have control over as the creator. You're responsible for curation and presentation, and the rest is up to SM *Smile*

I like your presentation here, with an emphasis on brisk and sporty cold-weather activities sure to get one's blood circulating. You brought the theme home with a GIF of a hockey scene, and added a personal touch with the picture of your boys having outdoor winter fun.

You have a lovely fat list of words, all guaranteed to create thoughts of frigid temperatures and seasonal, action-packed delights. I'm getting cold just looking at them 🥶

Ok, as for improvement suggestions: I see you've misspelled "Arctic," which is enough to turn me into a raging polar bear *Rolling* You also neglected to add two more genres to the item, such as "Activity" and "Sports" or "Environment." This will help your item be found when browsing and also be nominated for as many Quill Awards as possible... Is that even possible for a Word Search? Maybe I'm mistaken. Anyway, choosing genres is one of my favorite parts of the "small stuff" associated with adding items to WdC.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*
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