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Prompt 10 entry; Is one human being worth more than another
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE ESSAY

This is a spiritual essay that ponders the question of human worth.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the essay asked the question about worth and discussed how living life comes full circle.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is written in the first person. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.

*Star* CONCULSION

The essay comes to a conclusion after a reasonable argument. Well done.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. If anything, I would use WDC ML to increase the font and make it easier to read on the eyes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader using a more formal voice, and leaves one to ponder the question about worth in their own lives. Thought provoking.

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