I love this story. Sentence construction made everything flow smoothly. I love the realization that, even though she had gone to church many a time (and was probably baptized in her church), she did not fully understand (and accept) the gift of Grace and Mercy the Creator had given the world in the form of his Son.

As I read this, and especially the latter part of the story, I could actually visualize biblical references popping up on the right side of your story. In fact, I can visualize this being passed out on sheets, with relevant Bible verses being listed by each paragraph. Well done!