\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4796246
Review #4796246
Viewing a review of:
 A Pair of Black Crows in Two Eucalyptus Open in new Window. [E]
A pair of black crows, staying together - a poem.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
Credit this reviewer
#4796246
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
Greetings, Tim!

It's been a while since I found one of your poems on the Random Read and Review.

I love this free verse depiction of two crows as they go about their lives. You share a snapshot of the moments you can see out your window, and it's both picturesque and carefully detailed. We feel as though we are seeing a sample of your journal as you contemplate the beauty of creation.

I can never think of anything to suggest that people change about their poetry, as each piece is a unique portrayal of life as it is seen by one person.

On mobile, I'm unaware of the size and style font you've used, but I always recommend Size 4 Verdana.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *NoteR* You have not yet responded to this review. Ignore
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4796246