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 Planetfall  Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about an astronaut preparing to explore a new planet for the first time
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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"One small step for man. One giant leap for mankind." - Neil Armstrong

An astronaut is trying to guide his ship to land on a planet. He is about to be the first person to step onto it. They must deal with the weather, make sure that the ship stays steady, and also, get their outfit on. After all, he's about to make planetfall, and be the first to explore a new world.

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I thought that the characters and story was interesting.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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