February is a Busy Month [E] Valentines, Superbowls, and more! |
Hello, StephBee, aka sgcardin! INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW: I enjoyed reading and playing your "February is a Busy Month" word search every time I visited it, including today. Your writing and game kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK: I found your "February is a Busy Month" word search in your "Steph Bee's Honey Pit " forum today, and your incentive grabbed my attention, plus I was in the mood for doing a word search, so I clicked right on over, read it and then played it. February really is a busy month! I had forgotten how many things are crammed in this shortest month of the year, but your word search hints reminded me. I liked that you had a mix of short and long words, events, and things typically associated with February as hints for your "February is a Busy Month" word search. My favorite line was the "groundhog" because today is Groundhog day. Happy Groundhog day! Hoping for a sooner spring here. I loved your big, happy bee image that made the whole "February is a Busy Month" word search feel more festive, happy, and fun for me. I didn't notice any spelling mistakes in your "February is a Busy Month" word search. I thought the community and romance / love genres you selected for this "February is a Busy Month" word search were a perfect match for it, especially as you are running a community challenge along with the item and February is commonly known as the love month. IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER: In the spirit of helpfulness, and because of the requirements of a new reviewing challenge I joined recently, I have two little suggestions to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section. Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you! "Flowers" is listed twice as a clue, and even though I only saw it once in the puzzle, the solve didn't turn green for me until I highlighted it a second time. I would recommend deleting the second one. Whether you substitute it for something else or not doesn't matter as much as just taking out the duplicate for future players, in my opinion. The "other" genre isn't likely to net you more future readers or players, as I don't think anyone searches for that. I'd recommend choosing a different genre. Perhaps "food," "holiday," "friendship," "personal," or "experience" might be nice options? There's a drop down list, as you know, because you had to use it to select the genres you did choose. I don't have it memorized; those are just some suggestions. The actual list will probably be more helpful. As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't. CONCLUSION: I enjoyed reading and playing your "February is a Busy Month" word search, and thinking about all the fun that fits in to February as I played. Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community! May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance during the busy February month, and always! PWheeler A SuperPower Reviewers Choice review! Positive Hearts A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" The B.E.A.R. Fund
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