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 The Woman I’ll Never Be (Poem)  Open in new Window. [E]
A dream of a perfect life, yet shadowed by unattainable desires and fleeting ambition.
by Sasha Harding Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I was browsing for a poem to review
And came across this gem, written by you.
The title and brief description are catching
The genres you've chosen are exactly matching.

The poem itself flows smooth, from the start
It echoes the beat of many a heart.
We all have our dreams and our aspirations
And then the reality is some perspiration!

While I quite understand how you feel
I do hope that writing this has helped you heal.
And I wonder if, with a bit of hope
You'd actually find it easier to cope.

After all, every tunnel has its light
And after the darkness, the dawn is bright
So I wish for you some enthusiasm
To help you bridge this current chasm.

Remember, life is all about phases
And as we negotiate the puzzles and mazes
We come across many an aspect
Some quite dismal, some almost perfect

So - chin up, and keep the smile on your face
And await the blessings of grace!
In the meantime, thanks for sharing this write
Your words show some great insight.


Write On!
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