I love this story "poem". It reminds me of how I wrote in the beginning. My style has changed a lot and has become more conventional, but I love the child-like playful way you have addressed the magical subjects of your poem. The tone of the entire story is fun and companionable. I felt like a friend was including me in a magical secret. Which is why I found the use of profanity in the piece unnecessary and damaging to the piece. It rather than the other subject matter is what raises the rating for me.