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When Gods Dance Open in new Window. [E]
Eruption in the Halemaumau Crater of Kilauea
by Fyn-dragon Author Icon
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Review by Past Member 'oldmonty'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is a clever write for a Quadrette, since I am a mere mortal. I thought these four lines were telling me to beware of a volcanic eruption. I look for a story in all that I read and especially want rhyme and rhythm along with the picture I see and with write I found all in these few lines. Thanks for sharing.
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