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 The Gift Open in new Window. [E]
What will I receive for my birthday
by Sumojo Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Sumojo!

I'm here for I Write 2025... but I have to warn you, your item is not a valid entry. It needs to be something written in March. I’m pretty sure Annette will honor this review, so you don’t have to worry about me, but I wish I’d checked before I hopped in after you *Laugh*

With that aside, I have to say this was a fun and amusing read. It reminds me a little of Dr. Seuss. The thought at the end about what really matters adds depth to the goofiness, and we can’t help hoping the narrator does receive something they really want for a gift. Giving gifts is always such an awkward thing… we can’t really ask grownups “so, what are you expecting for your birthday/Xmas/wedding/whatever…” I personally think the wisest choice is a gift card, maybe an online one or one that is usable at many different places.

I enjoyed the rollicking rhymes and the playfulness of the theme. Your formatting is nice, big and clear, and I can’t particularly think of anything to suggest for improvement. Perhaps a cover image; I know I try to give all my items an image of some kind, even if it’s just a stock pic from the WdC vault.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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