Hello Token-Jester

I found your item on the Plug page.

I like stories about animals and I thought this was a cute story with a happy ending, it was nice to hear that the cat in question escaped the authorities and made her way back to your Mum with her kittens! Animals are clearly not as stupid as people think!

I do think however you could have added a bit more detail to your true story as this does not tell us much. Who were the "City Workers"? Why did they suddenly turn up? What do you mean by "Get fixed"? What was wrong with them? What happened to the kittens in the end?

It is a cute story but could maybe have a bit more detail and pad it out a bit for improvement.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .