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Grundlebletch von Hoogenspit  [E] A revealing fairy tale  |
| (5.0)   Greetings, Beholden! I am reviewing this because your story appeared in the "Read and Review" link. I couldn't resist a children's story about a troll!  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked This was very well-written. I enjoyed your storytelling and found it entertaining. There were no distractions to throw me off. Grundle was the perfect name for your troll. I liked that he started out as a cave troll with no intention of leaving the tunnels. I like the way you came up with the idea of him turning into a troll under the bridge. Fun, silly fact: Here in Michigan, we have the Upper and Lower Peninsulas. The Mackinac Bridge connects the two, and we often just refer to it as just "The Bridge." Well, we who live below the Bridge are nicknamed "The Trolls."  And U.P-ers north of the Bridge, are nicknamed "Yoopers." Yeah, this has little to do with your story, but it did come to mind, so I had to share it.   Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderI have absolutely no suggestions!  Final ThoughtsNicely written. Great tone. Good visuals, too. Thank you for sharing your talent!  A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" "The WDC Angel Army" "Anniversary Reviews" Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 04/15/2025 @ 12:27pm EDT