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 Pitter Pat Open in new Window. [13+]
A poem about Halloween.
by StephBee Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello StephBee Author Icon

Hi again. By the way, I love your milk and cookies costumicon.

My First Impression:

I hear the chains and squeaks and groans in the background as I read your poem celebrating that haunted holiday.

My Favorite Part:

"To bad they're too old to work" Now that is a scary thought!

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

Did you write this as a prompt or for a contest? Nicely done. Thank you for sharing your work. Again, Happy WdC Anniversary!

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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