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 Mysteries of the Night Open in new Window. [E]
What happens when the lights go out...
by Fyn Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Fyn!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

Ah, those midnight mysteries! You've chosen an amusing one for your poem. I like the free verse, conversational style, and the idea of your little doggie hogging the whole bed is one that I'm sure a lot of pet owners can identify with.

The only thing I can suggest is adding a line count and a note as to prompt... Actually, if each of your PPC5 poems is a separate item, you may want to gather them all into a folder to keep them tidy. Perhaps you've already done this. A third genre would be good too, perhaps Comedy or Animal.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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