Hi ProfRichDett

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Positives

I enjoyed reading this item. It read like an allegory that you might read in a religious text, where there is a moral behind the tale to be learned and studied. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement, other than that I would have loved to have seen this piece expanded a little bit to tell more of the story.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Jeff
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