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Sisyphean Attempts at Self-Improvement Open in new Window. [18+]
A mixed collection of prose and poetry written for various WdC activities in 2025.
by Jeff Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Greetings, Jeff *Smile*

I'm here for I Write 2025.

I like the psychological dabbling of this poem, peering into the mind of one who is loose with the truth. In a way, I know that mindset... I might even dare to suggest, as authors, we all know how it feels to craft what is not real and present it as though it is. We live in our minds, dreaming of what has not happened. Why write nonfiction when fiction is so much more fun *BigSmile*

This is well crafted, with straight lines and no attempts at fancy indents. It's easy to read and perhaps too easy for me to relate to *Yikes*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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