Short but potent little poem. I like the simplicity of it. Sometimes people feel like they have to use flowery obscure poetie words. I like hat you've done using simple every day words. You've eli ated the words and the subject for me in doing this. The one thing I would suggest is to put the picture of a nice quiet pond as the cover for this. It would show up in the box on the upper left of the poem. You can do this by editing the item and selecting from the stock available pictures. It would add a touch of visual stimulation to wour word pictures.