Hi Ghostievai

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Positives

I think you did a great job with the visuals and the description in this piece. In just a few short paragraphs you managed to engage the reader and create vivid imagery and a narrative that moved along at a brisk pace.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Jeff
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