Hi micah

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Positives

I thought you did a good job with the figurative language in this piece. It was short, but to the point and evocative. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a good job creating this short prose that really had an impactful effect on the reader. Well done!


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