Hi summer blush

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Positives

I thought this was a really charming story. It captured the magic and the excitement of early love, and your use of description kept things engaging and easy for the reader to visualize. Nice job!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece.


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