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 |  | I Know You By Your Tells  [ASR] A woman talking about how she knows her man's signs  |
| (5.0)   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM"Anniversary Reviews"   My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEMA poem about observing one's significant other and assessing their mood.  WHAT I LIKED I thought this was a very insightful poem.  STRUCTUREThis is free form poem with the first two lines of each stanza rythming. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "I know you by the glare, Today's a day, beware" There's a lot in this description. There's a glare and a facial expression can say a thousand words. In this short, succinct sentence, the poet packs a lot - there's an unhappy look, a moody expression, be weary of approach. Nice blend with the visual sense and emotional outlook. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe opening engages the reader with it's sing song rythme, and keeps them reading. The title announces what to expect and I picked this poem because I wanted to see where it would lead me as a reader. A reflective poem with the hint of a whimsical voice that dares the reader to go deeper. An Angel Army Review
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