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 Birchbark Open in new Window. [E]
A Mirror Sestet-unrhymed. Oh my goodness!
by Fyn Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, Fyn!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

Oh my goodness, indeed! This is such a confusing structure despite seeming rather simple. The way your lines wrap around the page is impossible for me to wrap my head around... I refuse to comment on whether you've nailed the structural requirements or not *Laugh*

I love the unique natural theme you chose here, contemplating the birch bark and going deeper to observe an analogy with our lives as we shed our skins and develop into our deeper personalities. It's thoughtfully done, and the picturesque details outweigh the rules of form and structure.

I might suggest hiding the details in a dropnote, to keep a tidier appearance.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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