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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Greetings *Smile*

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

The first thing I should say before I forget, you need two six-line verses to qualify both for the poetic form itself and for Promptly Poetry. This is great, just add another set in the same mood *Wink*

You've utilized the form perfectly, creating a flowing, naturally cyclical feel without being stiff or peculiar about the repeating words. I always enjoy peeking into your naturalist perspective of life; it's so different from the usual I'm familiar with.

Perhaps you should indent the fifth line... No, I don't think that would make sense. Capitalize the first letter? Because for a moment I thought it wrapped around the mobile screen and didn't create a full six lines. It would probably be apparent on the desktop, however, and is a minor thing.

An interesting read; I enjoyed it. Don't forget to add another verse *Smile*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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