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Sevenling (My friend loved...) Open in new Window. [13+]
...remembering on Memorial Day
by Dave Author Icon
Review by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What a gift!

This is a great poem, Dave. This is well said in the small format. Grief leaves a hole never filled. They are honored, never forgotten. Still friends, always missed.

I hope these are not too many words. The poem is almost too sacred to comment on. I'm remembering my own griefs, processing these, and taking in the wisdom of your skill.

God has given us a great outlet. Thanks for sharing, my Friend and our Leader. During my days on Writing.Com you have taken the place of my high school English Lit teacher, both of you are now mentors and friends.

Blessings Always.

Jay (aka "Stan")
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