Hello Rick Fix

Hello, and thank you for the opportunity to check out your writing.

My First Impression:

The title and caption caught my eye, and made me want to read further. Ah, the joy/despair of oncoming puberty! The insane thoughts, the wonder of other other sex, and the fear of rejection.

My Favorite Part:

I had to chuckle at the seeming "make out" session, at least from the girl's point of view. Boys are boys no matter the age, it seems.

I liked the way you wrote this, with no capitals or punctuation. To me, it made it stand out.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

I didn't see any grammar issues, outside of the "no punctuation" But it didn't take away from the overall production.

A tricky time in young men/women's lives, and I'm sure there will always be the thoughts and dreams that come along with the growing up. You write this with deliberation, and good taste, where it could have been crass or rude. Thank you for that.

Keep up the good work, and I appreciate your letting me share in your writing.