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 The Moment Open in new Window. [E]
Every life has moments that affects what happens after
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Mouser!

I found this with the Random Read and Review button.

What a cute little love poem. It reminds me of Ed Sheeran or Andy Grammar and their spunky puppy love ditties.

You've balanced it nicely on the page, and seem to have used a good font size on mobile (I almost always use Size 4 Verdana.)

It's a bit simplistic, but that's the charm of it, settling into cozy, relatable cliches and name dropping familiar old creators (though I've never heard of Larry Niven...)

Not sure I have anything worthwhile to suggest here, except it would be a nice thing to write out in fancy font (either by hand or with a word or image processor) and give as a gift to the loved one you're referring to.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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