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 iAmNothing Open in new Window. [13+]
Not by design, but should be a fairly metaphorical piece for "some" to dive on.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Wow, this is a super cool piece of writing! I love the rappy, spoken word poetry rhythms and the quick fire flow of “I am not” piled one over another. It’s simply amazing how it feels so random and yet so vivid and meaningful. I can identify with so much of that myself… no matter how many different labels people try to apply, they never quite fit and I have to say “no, I’m not really that at all…” sigh. One seems to spend most of one’s life denying the labels others apply, trying not to fall into ignorant categories and striving to cultivate the truth of who one really is.

This reminds me of the lyrics of Imagine Dragons lead singer Dan Reynolds, who struggles with depression and other issues. Have you ever listened to Polaroid? Click here *Delight*

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I would recommend using Size 4 Verdana font for ease of readability and accessibility for all ages and abilities. You can use the row of tiles above the text entry box to modify font size and style, and to do other cool useful things. I know you want to leave this open to interpretation, but I would highly recommend selecting three appropriate genres for the piece, as it can qualify you for as many Quill Award nominations as possible this year. (To learn about all things Quill related, check out the portfolio of Lilli ☕ Author Icon, a Moderator.) You can use Psychology, Drama, Emotional, Philosophy, Melodrama, Self-Help, Inspirational, or many others.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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