Hi William Wyatt

Congratulations on your account anniversary! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.


Positives

I really enjoyed reading this piece. It was well written, descriptive, and evocative. Really nice job!


Suggestions

No specific creative suggestions, although from a visual perspective I would encourage perhaps a slightly larger font size to make it a little more readable for your audience (WdC tends to have default font sizes on the smaller side of the spectrum).


Overall

Overall, this was an enjoyable read. Good work!


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Jeff
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