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I Didn't Mean to Love You Open in new Window. [E]
Pure love is sacrificial--but my heart still wants you.
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Greetings, Vesper Amara!

I noticed this on the “currently online” sidebar and thought it looked interesting.

First off, I love the balanced and thoughtful way you’ve handled the subject here. I was afraid it would be one of those dreary poems about abuse and heartbreak, but instead you’ve crafted a beautiful and mature consideration of what could have been a very awkward and unhappy soap opera situation.

The heroine is mature enough to recognize that the path she wants may not be the best way for the one she loves, especially considering his prior commitments to others. It is not a matter of chasing the flame, but of maintaining stability for the others involved for as long as is required. Her strength of character in letting go gracefully reminds me of strong women I know of personally, which adds realism to the portrayal.

I like the balance of your lines and verses, opening each verse with a short opener and continuing with longer thoughts. It’s an easy and engaging read, except I do always recommend Size 4 Verdana font to keep it accessible to everyone.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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