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 Grayscale Open in new Window. [13+]
a short story inspired by 48 hour short story contest
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Sox!

I'm here for I Write 2025.

A fine story of humanity surviving somehow after the great disaster. I love how you took the prompt request and spun it into something striking and unique, without sounding too stilted.

You've painted the charred, lifeless landscape for us in vivid dullness - is that possible? - and left out most of the details of whatever, focusing on the human interaction and the sense of hope coming in at last.

Why does everyone assume that when you're all alone, you're silent? I always talk to myself, long rambling discussions about anything and everything. I usually whisper, though, and I get super nervous and choked up around people as it is, so if I hadn't raised my voice in a while it would probably get quite rusty...

This is a great little story, and I really enjoyed it. I can't think of anything to suggest except maybe a sequel... I'm curious if they can survive and if there's anything else alive out there besides a daisy *Radioactive* *Flowery*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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