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O' Heralder Open in new Window. [E]
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Greetings, Jen!

I discovered this poem using the Random Read and Review button.

What a creative and amusing use of the peculiar given prompt! I’ve never seen “the daily poem” before, as I only appeared here in July 2023. I wonder if it’s still active in any way… ah, I see it was hosted by our good friend Jayne, and has been replaced by “Cards Against Authors.” Fun!

This was a delightful and fanciful take on the experience of a mouse in the house. We can almost picture the heralder, perhaps an old lady at tea with another one, or maybe the boy delivering the evening news. You’ve formatted everything quite well, though I always recommend size 4 Verdana font to ensure your words stand out upon the page, especially when it’s only 8 lines. Also, the phrase “link text here” is merely an example of; feel free to replace that with “notes” or something similar - but don’t use anything with an apostrophe because it’ll crash the code.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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