Hi Seuzz

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I enjoyed reading this episodic outline. I can definitely see the inspiration from the source material and you did a great job of fleshing it out and providing enough detail for the reader to get a clear picture of the story and the characters. You also did a good job incorporating a lot of the characters from the Spider-Man universe.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Jeff
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