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 The Fading sun Open in new Window. [E]
the dying suns gratitude
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Positives

I really enjoyed this poem. I thought your imagery and your structure were great, which made it an easy, engaging read. The personification of the sun was a fantastic idea for a poem!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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