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Winter Open in new Window. [E]
a poem from my upcoming book out in June `25; published are at inkwhisper.gumroad.com
by Bi0Hazard Author Icon
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Review by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Nicely done. Emotionally warm, gentle, tender, yet somehow sad. The two clues I saw were the photo attached to the poem and the phrase, "and it was empty," lead me to a couple of conclusions. First, the poem refers to a faithful fur baby pup, who has died. Secondly, it could refer to a child or children who have left home. Hence, the "empty nest."

The first possibility seems more likely, since a child is never mentioned. If that is the case, I am so sorry for I lost a dog, who was a longtime, faithful friend, last year in April.

I have no grammatical suggestions to make, since this poem is well-written, touching the heart. WRITE ON!
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