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The Absence of Wavelength Open in new Window. [18+]
A nothing from nowhere cast his words to a world wide wind, hindered by periphery.
by Brian K Compton Author Icon
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Greetings, Brian!

I’m here for I Write 2025 *Smile*

Does that say 56 ribbons *Shock2* Heavens alive, that’s mindblowing *Mindblown* I’m happy you’re getting the recognition, respect and honor you deserve around here. You have a unique mind that’s always fun to poke around inside *Cool*

Ah, the flight of an arrow. It reminds me of the Longfellow poem, https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/44624/the-arrow-and-the-song . Oh, now I also remember the Bible verse about children being “arrows in your quiver.” I believe that’s what inspired Dan Reynolds (born Mormon) to name his first daughter Arrow… but I digress.

I like your confidence in giving Webbie and Steph poetry in your blog; I know they said it’s ok and even encouraged, but I’m always concerned it’s not relevant or interesting or “bloggy” enough. This is the first time I’ve tried their Bard's Hall blog challenge, and my head is spinning with all the stuff I’ve assigned myself to do this month!

You’ve expressed existential dissatisfaction and confusion about the meaning of life, which is always relatable as I ask myself the same things every day. Indeed, sometimes I lean into Nihilism, ready to give up on achieving anything if everything means nothing and we're all a bunch of corrupt sinners anyway *Pthb*

Totally random thought: doesn't the "absence of wavelength" indicate death? *Skull* I can't think of anything to suggest you change, add or "fix." You know how difficult it is for me to be critical of poetry. I see the arrow, sent with such practice, so much effort, aimed at... Nothing? Sending one out, there should be a target. What should humanity be aiming for? So much potential for consideration packed in here; I really appreciate it.

Oh, by the way, that story you liked so much placed third at Short Shots *Delight* Just thought I’d let you know because it took longer to be judged. I couldn’t have placed without your helpful insights *Hug1**Smile**Hug2*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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