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 Haiku Open in new Window. [E]
A collection of haiku poems.
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Review by Emlyn Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hello -

The second haiku is boring and obvious, so I'll just ignore that.

The fall sun rises, - great juxtaposition

Leaves brown, orange, red, beautiful. - don't say beautiful - show it in the imagery.

The falling leaves die - missed a poetic trick here - The fallen leaves die

Enjoyed the read..............Em


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