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To Live in the Sea Open in new Window. [E]
Imagine you have the ability to breathe underwater
by Gratefully IE Author Icon
Review by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Gratefully IE, this is a wonderful poem that follows the prompt so well. This seems to be written in a free verse style, since I cannot find a consistent rhythm or rhyme.

Great imagination, chronicling the activities of the underwater world, things to do with times of rest. Four quatrains describe a peaceful vacation day.

Well done! WRITE ON!
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