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 Going Away to College Open in new Window. [E]
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by Ms. Brightside Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job conveying emotion and feeling in this piece. Your use of detail at the beginning helped set the scene and allowed the reader to identify with you as you eventually shared more of your mindset with them. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a solid job with this piece. Nice work!


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