Hi Leadwood

Congratulations on your account anniversary! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.


Positives

I enjoyed reading this story. Flash fiction stories are always fun to read, and I thought you did a great job with this one.


Suggestions

This isn't specifically a suggestion for the story itself, but I'd highly recommend setting at least one genre other than "Contest Entry" for your piece in order to give potential readers some idea of the story's subject matter.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a solid job with this. Well done!


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Respectfully,

Jeff
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