Hi Tim Chiu

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I thought you did a really great job with the structure and imagery of this piece. The language was elegant and sophisticated, and you painted a vivid picture in comparatively few words and lines. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Nice work!


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Sincerely,

Jeff
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