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 | These Are My JOTtings, Part #2  [E] We live much of life amid unique choices. Joy is anchored in The One beyond our life.  |
| (5.0)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews ~ Summer Break"  Hello, Jay O'Toole, aka 777stan! INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:  I enjoyed reading your "Some Days Ahead" poem every time I read it, including today. Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end every time.MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:  Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I read this "Some Days Ahead" poem of yours sometime in the past and enjoyed it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "July" file.  ). I know Anniversary Reviews is technically closed this month, but I'm carrying on the tradition anyway.  I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging. It is meant to be honest and respectful, and in accordance with WDC guidelines. Your title drew me in and I clicked and read your poem and enjoyed it greatly, so I decided to give you a review as a little anniversary gift. Happiest anniversary wishes to you and best wishes on your writing future too! I loved your poem so much. It was full of truth and ultimately about trusting the Lord, who is in charge of the future and eternity. I thought your poem's rhyming worked beautifully with the message of your poem. My favorite lines were the whole last stanza. They were a great finale for your poem and a lovely way to praise the Lord. What a glorious day that will be! It could be tonight! Or another thousand years or more, but that day will surely come. The blog that this poem is in is a testament to your prolific writing. Very well done on your consistent writing, and especially of writing things that honor the Lord. I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "Some Days Ahead" poem. My very favorite part of your "Some Days Ahead" poem is that your love for the Lord and trust in Him shined throughout it.IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER: I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!  As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't. CONCLUSION:  I enjoyed reading your "Some Days Ahead" poem, and empathized with your sentiments that you expressed in it. Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart for the Lord God Almighty, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community! Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance, and may the Lord bless you and all that you do, during your anniversary month, and always! PWheeler   A SuperPower Reviewers Choice review!   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 07/11/2025 @ 2:18am EDT