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Kris Kringle’s Consternation Open in new Window. [13+]
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Review by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Welp, I must say, "This is not my usual piece to review." However, I shall sally forth to address a few positive items, since redress would be my first hope for Father Christmas.

The form is good, technically speaking. Six quatrains of a-b-c-b rhyme scheme with tetrameter/trimeter couplets of mixed iambic and anapestic rhythms. Although the forms in the content were a bit much. *Wink*

My year-round love of Christmas was challenged herein, being that your concept was quite clear. Must binge on Christmas music today, and if I had time, Christmas movies to cleanse the palate. (shudder...) (Half a star removed purely for content.)

I shall look twice next time I see your name next to a Christmas poem title.

That is all.
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