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Given: Aug 1, 2025 at 4:01pm
Length: 737 Characters |
733 w/o WritingML
Welp, I must say, "This is not my usual piece to review." However, I shall sally forth to address a few positive items, since redress would be my first hope for Father Christmas.
The form is good, technically speaking. Six quatrains of a-b-c-b rhyme scheme with tetrameter/trimeter couplets of mixed iambic and anapestic rhythms. Although the forms in the content were a bit much.
My year-round love of Christmas was challenged herein, being that your concept was quite clear. Must binge on Christmas music today, and if I had time, Christmas movies to cleanse the palate. (shudder...) (Half a star removed purely for content.)
I shall look twice next time I see your name next to a Christmas poem title.
That is all.
You responded to this review 08/01/2025 @ 6:24pm EDT
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