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 The Write Stuff? Open in new Window. [E]
A poem in Sparrowet form (described following the poem).
by Dan I Am Author Icon
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Review by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Nicely done, Dan, given the constraints of the sadistic Sparrow. *Wink* Your two hemistiches are well-chosen and completely understood. Some of the forms we are learning from Dr. Dave are indeed "brain-busters." However, in this case, you have no worries, Sir. You created the form flawlessly. WRITE ON! Jay
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