I redid my review to make it public.

The story begins with the third paragraph and ends with "I also received the unending gratitude of the world for restoring the internet."

The premise is interesting because of the many ways we depend on the internet without thinking about it. AI will be similar. An evil AI can say it's raining and some folks won't go outside to verify the truth... fake websites and bots are already doing that.

I'd give this a 3.7 as I've liked other writings of yours that I've read, but not this one.

I couldn't connect with either character and it read more like an essay than a personal story.

I'd give this a 3.8 as I've liked other writings of yours that I've read, but not this one.

Wish I could rate it higher. Next story?

"My reviewing: Cleaning up the mess."